In all the years I’ve lived here, I’ve never once called
this place my home.
I’m not supposed to
be here. My doppelganger tricked me. When she died, she dragged me straight to
hell. She’s the evil one. Not me.
I stare around me at all the misery, grief, regret. Everything
that was wrong on earth is wrong here, but here there is no joy, excitement or
hope. They feed on each other, these demons with no love. I hide in the shadows
and wait until I can fight my way back to earth. Because I still have love,
hope, faith. As long as I hold on to those, I will never belong here.
Now see how everyone else did it!
I like where you took that.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I love seeing the struggle and the goal for the character!
ReplyDeleteLove that no matter how hard it is, she's still fighting it. Nice.
ReplyDeleteI love the mc's resolve to get out. :)
ReplyDeleteTotally intrigued by the situation. I love the way you described hell, and I adore the unfailing strength of your protagonist.
ReplyDeleteTrue to all your characters she will not give up, I love that about the way you write even with your micro stories. :) I really did not expect that from this prompt.
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